All Comments on 'An Artist & Her Muse'

A truly excellent erotic vignette.

Hi there,

I liked this tale. I hope you do write many others as well.

Are you really an artist?

Cheers,

Sam

A fine paean of praise to the beauty of the male body!

Intensely erotic, one of the best. Keep it up

Outstanding debut Rain! A mix of enticing story and wonderfully vivid, real, hot sex! A great read for men and women alike. Loved the hint of power exchange. Well done sweetheart. Very well done!

LH

I really loved this, you painted a great picture with your words. Ironic considering the subject matter. ;) And the rhythm of the story is beautiful, the way the desire ebbs and swells. Very real, and very sexy.

A very good story rain.

I very much liked the characters. This is, in my opinion, the most important part of the story.

And the description of the act itself was really hot. Concentrating on the feelings rather than the physical actions is what does it for me, every time.

Your detailed descriptions of the emotions of the woman was especially well done. You brought her along carefully from mild flirtation to full arousal in nice, clearly detailed fashion. I wished at times that I was that model. . . . Oh well!

This was fantastic! What I especially liked was the sense of development, and build-up. The story was exceedingly well written, and it captured a very rare magic in its exploration of beauty and attraction--the absolute mystery of what about the human body captivates us. As a male who has a fairly low opinion of his own physical attributes, I couldn't really identify with the either character per se, but I could certainly identify with the mind-games that we play with ourselves when confronted with a physical and emotional stimulous that we find blindingly attractive. That this story can elicit these kinds of thoughts is a testament to its power and eroticism. Bravo, 'rain! I hope you write more!

...voice you have! Great reading here.

this is one of those truly wonderful peices that if it had nothing else, it would still be beautiful. I enjoyed this story more than I can say and I hope you keep writting!

That was HOT!!!!!!!!!!

Fantastical!

Well written..well described...great pacing!

bravo!

I will be illustrating THIS one.

This story gave me a beautiful portrait of how a highly sensual woman loves to be taken by a man. I very much enjoyed the pacing of the story: it was a compelling read, but the story took its time...and I was caught between the desire to read faster for its action and the desire to read more slowly to savor its language. My favorite moments were when the Artist took time for her reflections...about what she was feeling and what was happening inside of her....(inside of her heart and mind as well as inside of her body). The scenes where she was playing with herself early on in the story and the scene where her genteel pussy turns into a cunt were very hot (even though I usually do not like incomplete sentences). This story had a wonderful legato pace and powerful crescendo moments.

This is poetry: "There's a moment when I'm fucking with a beautiful man, his hard cock plunging deeply inside of me, when I'm right on the edge of exploding that that genteel pussy becomes a cunt. A raw, hot wet place. The centre of the universe, where all the blood in my body congregates to swell the flesh, to tighten the hold, to feed the muscles that squeeze and grip until it is genteel no more."

Adding this one to my favorites! ~Imp

This is really great. I hope to see more.

The less I write the better.

Loved every word. Felt every word.

Please keep on writing.

Great description, rounded dialogue, very believable narrative -- full marks!

Thanks for the kind comments on this story, I haven't checked into Lit for a while but it's lovely to find kind feedback.

Cheers!

I always find it interesting to read a woman's description of sex, especially reaching climax, because how else can a man understand what it feels like? Your description of getting fucked by your model needed only one thing: margin notes to remind me to breathe. I didn't realize it but as the tension built I started holding my breath, and if they had lasted another minute I'm afraid I might have passed out. The story has an audacious premise, and your descriptions couldn't have been better. I'm glad your artist got laid, and I'm glad I read all about it. Great story!

Slow, gentle, and happily mutual - I love it! I can't help noticing similarities to (and differences from) one of my stories, "Little Flippy Skirt," another female artist/male model interlude.

Your very kind feedback on this story, am totally delighted that it's still being enjoyed here at Lit. :)

Thanks again!

This was like exqusite poetry that could leave one hovering between agony and ecstacy. So evocative, so seductive... why have you not written more?

Please write.

Most erotic story I have read on lit

Wow. Slow. Seductive. Powerful