All Comments on 'An Average Guy Ch. 02'

awwwwww =(

please hurry up with the next chapter its killing us this is a great story it really is please

The poor guy gets the hell beat out of him, and to top it off loses the girl he loves.

His family need their asses kicked for what they did to him.

you have a good story looking forword to part 3

she lied to him so fuck her

I say this in the utmost sincerity. Fuck! You! Apparently she doesn't really love him. I can tell what's going to happen. With the ending already guessed, why didn't he move on to another woman? If they really both feel the same way, then she wouldn't have agreed to even see another guy. *Sigh*

boy can you fuck up a story we come for a loving story not this shit. if we wanted to read this crap we could buy a news paper STOP DEPRESSING US REAL LIFE IS BAD ENOUGH WE NEED HAPPY LOVING STORIES.

So she doesnt love him, is totally controlled by parents, and his best friend betrays him..... nice

So why did she move up to see him anyway??? Wouldnt it have been easier to leave him alone? Hey Im all for a good story but....DAM! Wow did not see this coming at all

Great story, part 1 was good, and Alice sexy. Now the step-dad and mom got her away from him. Conflict makes for a story and love will win.

Another anonymous said "I didn't anticipate none of this", and that is just one of the reason why this story is so good.

Thanks kaidman, I think that you could be in major literature.

Very good story. With a cliff hanger like that though the next chapter better come fast, it's going to kill us readers lol.

"Chapter 3 is coming soon! "

that better be real fucking soon...

cheers... actually scratch that... piss poor cliff hanger chapter that has me all pissed the fuck off...

Ive been waiting for months now for Chapter 3!

The next chapter should be up next weekend. I know it's been taking a while.

stll not hear

Where is it? WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! I'll KILL YOU! HOLD ME BACK ANONS!!!!

Chapter 3 is awaiting approval.

I'm real sorry for the wait guys.

T.

Speechless

that's a bitch jeez she has to leave this guy for him if not then it will be a bad story

How does she go from being a smart woman who is in love with her brother to a mindless idiot who sides with her parents!

The step-dad just went from good guy to asshole in my book. I understand getting mad at the situation, but what you wrote was completely over the top. Leaving his step-son in the snow unconscious to freeze to death is attempted murder in my eyes. The fact that his mother seemed to do nothing to help her son speaks volumes of how much she did actually love him.

Why fuck up a good relationship

She goes from "I can't live without you" to "I'm married to someone else lol"

Alice is an adult and, apparently a qualified lawyer, how is it her parents can treat her like a child and drag her off. This part of the story really doesn't make any sense.