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Selena_KittSelena_Kittalmost 18 years ago
Mentioned

You've been mentioned in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout.

BabyBlue2005BabyBlue2005almost 18 years ago
Can't Wait ...

Chapter 3, NOW .... please, please, please :D

MC117MC117over 14 years ago
A small cliff hanger

A nice suspenseful ending.

BrettJBrettJover 12 years ago
a bit slower

Your choice to end it here, of course, but I found it a bit too brief ... I would have gone longer.

Dark_StormDark_Stormabout 9 years ago
Nice set-up

While this didn't have much in the way of an actual completed sex act, it was a logical next step in showing both Lawrence's and Elizabeth's internal struggles against the mores of proper society. Well done, again.

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