All Comments on 'An Education for Amy'

you have a great start here keep going. can't wait to read the next chapter

Brilliant story, so what happened next ? Did they move on to full sex together ?

I thought it was well done. Well written with a very good plot. Thank you, sir.

So good to read something and NOT be distracted by bad spelling, grammar, wrong tense, dumb story (so many are just so 'wannafuck-yeahsure'). Good also to have it not be 'real' incest, because that's sick adults/babies territory - despite the lure of the forbidden! I've gone to look at your other stories, now. JJ

Shouldn't be listed under incest. The adoption twist ruined what might have been a good story.

For Anonymous who thinks incest is sick adults/babies territory, why the fuck are you reading in this category?

I simply loved the story!!! It doesn't matter, them not being "real" siblings... they are brother and sister in their hearts... So the story is well placed among the incest/taboo section. It also would fit well as romance... or first time... Nevertheless... no matter in which section it is posted... it's just a great story!!!

It was a very enjoyable read! It had a good premise and a nice twist at the end. I would love to hear about the locked door, and what happens after that!

Thanks for writing!

It was a real pleasure to read a story where siblings behave like reasonable and responsible people instead of "just fucking" for the sake of a story.

Can't wait for the next part.

That was well written. I can't say anything more than that...just great story, great build-up, and I was glad for the happy ending.

Great story. Excellent suprise ending!!!!!!

good but only if you finish it the way it is now leaves to many things unsaid and undone you need to finish if you don't then it would have been better to have not posted it in the first place there are few things worse than an unfinished story

I'll maybe give this a 100 rating. If you're like some other wimp authors and don't choose to continue a real good hot story then you get a zero (0).

It is Great....

Soft but Hard...

It's a great start, I just hope you keep the story going for a few more chapters.

please continue writing the story. I just cannot wait to read the next chapter. Love it!

I would like to read a similar story, featuring an uncut male - this would provide an opportunity fo more education.

Added you as a favorite. Keep it up!

Just any other story that I enjoyed, like all your others.

The attraction to incest stories is that it's forbidden. If these two aren't really related, then it's not incest, then it loses it's appeal.

what a shame..

last part detroyed the hole story.. no brother sister.. wrong categorie.. !

1/5

Forget what every one says about not being real brother/sister. Step siblings are in this catagory and even though they aren't related by blood they have still grown up as such. This qualifies and is different than the norm. Please continue!

Great story! Looking forward to a continuation!

A well written story very much above the level of the average contrigbution to Literotica. Hardcore fans will of course clammer for a sequel. As a matter of fact I'd enjoy one myself.

A beautifully written story and and amazing twist at the end. This story IS in the right section although the sequal would have to be placed elsewhere. Don't listen to people who critisize it for that because it is a superficial 'problem' and nothing to do with the quality of the work. I absolutely loved it. Simply brilliant.

Are you going to continue this story?

It is excellently written, and not to mention hot.

Unexpected ending! Loved it!

although i loved the story. Amy was borderline retarded in a way but i can see why you had to do it like this. Still the end is like a Bollywood story :)

Love Reading Your Story!

Always Leave Me Wanting To Read More!

Amazing!!! I loved it. What a terrific story. Ended just right, was paced just right. Definitely one of my new favorites!! Would love to read more.

But you are a dirty rotten tease! lol why skip the juicy bit at the end?

please add more to this story!!!!!!!

Love the pacing and how you work through your stories with varying levels of seduction and steadily increasing intensity, though, with this story, they came in sporadic bursts which really worked in creating tension, I feel. Even though you don't seem to deviate beyond one chapter in your stories thus far,I really hope that we can continue into Amy's education. There's SO much more that Erik can teach her! Once again, great job!

Very fine and tantalizing story, but it certainly isn't finished. At least one more chapter would make it so much nicer!!

I was disappointed to realize at the end that they aren't really related. So the whole teasing through the whole thing wasn't really incestuous, after all. That takes a bit out of the bite of the story, so to speak. I would like to see a part two, but it wouldn't be as good since they aren't related after all.

Perhaps you could write another similar story, using just as much teasing, but having them stay related.

you TEASE! *low growling noise* MORE!! Please?

Love love love this story...

Loved this one - well written, highly erotic, great buildup, wonderful resolution. Wow - just wow!

Very well done.....can you feel whats next !

You're great at writing this sensual torture!

Some other readers want a happy finish for the story but the whole point is the buildup and tension so it's much better off as is with an unresolved ending. Very innocent and sweet.

Sometimes it is really bad - but in a good way, if that makes sense ?

I do love your writing !

My god, i needed so much more of story !

I really go into it....

THANK YOU....

I think your ending was perfect. Thank you.

Anon is totally correct. That was a great way to end the story. A shame that there couldn't be more but 5/5 Sterling! Good stuff!

This is so good that makes one want more but yet it is the best way to end a story.

This is an allsome story.

Love love love this story. Wish there was another chapter!

I suppose we can only imagine where this goes now. Good luck to them. I just wish the author had written some more to this lovely tale.

The adoption thing is such a cringeworthy copout. A shame. And if the story wasn't gonna show the culmination of their relationship anyway the last page could have jist been cut out.

Loving a lot of your stories, but please add the sequels. That's the part I've been looking forward to.

Not brother / not sister = not incest = fake

Beautiful story. Loved it. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work!!!!

There is no sex and is 4 pages of teasing. This would be a good first chapter but as a complete story not worth your time.

Anyone who needs a sequel didn't consider the internal monologues about what Erik might do if Amy wasn't his real sister.

The story is complete as it is and it's the work of a true master. I wish I had written it myself.

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Only critique...the ending is a bit abrupt..still nice story

This started out with the slow burn build up that I like in a brother-sister story but it ended way-way-way too abruptly. Even if it's not really a genetic incest story there is true brother-sister love and there were taboos to overcome. You really should have added a chapter where their love is consummated, and then a chapter letting us know the direction their lives are going from there.

As expected from Spen, magnificently written. As a big fan of the ‘Tease’ this story is complete as written for me.

Good storeyup to the point they discovered they weren’t brother and sister, disappointed that you didn’t continue the story on to consummation, and on further to them becoming a couple or even marriage. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Finish it! The reason I want a sequel is that I DID consider the internal monologues,

I wish I'd read comments first. I hate 'tease' stories.

Loved it!

This was great.