All Comments on 'An Evening With a Young Woman'

I think that story was well written and very good i would love to see how she does with the lady cop because the story kept me glued to my seat and my hand glued elsewhere

I loved the detailed descriptions! I felt as if I could actually see Julie, Jill and the cop. And would I love to see them!!

I like your stories- very good descriptions- and you cob=ver all my (male)fantasies of lesbian sex, especially pussy to pussy. More please

Juila, Your stories have such great erotic possibilities. For me at least I want longer stories with mote intimate detail. Love the idea of picking up sexual partners for an evening of real hot sex. Want to here more about you and your Mom. You are a real "Hottie" and I love your stories! Ken

Juila: I thoroughy enjoy your writing. Recently, I read a "How to Write Lesbian Sex Scenes" by Colleen Thomas. An excellent how to article. If she ever read any of your entrees, she would give you 5 gold stars. She suggests the importance of three main concepts: emotional response, don't hurry or rush love [emphasis on the foreplay, not just the climax] and preparation - how the f/f got to this point in time. You continue to capture them all!

Here are some things that I like about this story that made it believable: Julie was caught off guard by Jill's bold approach. I wondered what her emotions were after learning that Jill was about to be arrested. Did she want to go and warn Jill? How would she do that?

I liked when Molly asked Julie - "How much?" and the dialogue that followed. Molly's line that "cruising" was ok, just don't pay for it.

It was funny that Julie moved from the "seller to the buyer". I liked the subtle observations of the "younger crowd v. the age group" that I think Julie was more interested in.

And what about the LP Officer, Molly Patterson - did Julie and Molly ever meet? They say that many women love men in uniform. It is true that women love women in uniform?

Anyway, as a mature male who thoroughly enjoys lesbian love - this story was top shelf.

You left us wondering about Jill... and what about a Molly and Julie hook-up. We sure would love to hear some more, but perhaps as in life - there is no "more", last chapter has been written... hmmmmmm

dude near Austin, TX

Nice story! It left us hanging, but wanting so much more. Please give us, at least, a sequel, if not a series.

Very entertaining story with a twist, it was sexually thrilling, your descriptions of people and the events that took place were excellent. Please give us more.