All Comments on 'An Evening with Danielle Ch. 02'

I really didn't expect the story to go the way it did at the end. Chapter 1 of the story was a great lesbian tale, but this one included some really good exhibitionism and public sex. The only way it could've been better is if the guys at the end had cum on the girls. After all, you did comment that it was a cum fest, why not let some of that hot cum fly onto the girls too.

Oh, by the way Merrie, you could've always included some male homoeroticism as well at the end.

Overall, another REALLY great group of stories!! Thanks!!

(yes, I came twice!!!)

-Brad

Good hot story, Thanks Keep writing

Ollie

..the break into fantasy sex on the dance floor was an unexpected ending and a little 'detached' in the description. Pull all the feelings out. They would be there in spades. E.g. She would not just be aware that her friend was making her naked for all to see, she would be reacting to it more strongly than you describe.

.......what else is there to say?

Waiting for Danielle to get her loving on.

Muy Caliente!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! You ladies are Hot, Hot, Hot!!!

This cries out for another part -- it's unbelievably erotic!