by Rallynoangels
I love reading stories that could have been written by my wife and i. Especially when they are a little naughty.
Very much want to see this continue. Could enjoy a good humiliating,submissive shopping trip. A few compromising pictures to share with Mark, and maybe a few she wouldn't want Mark to see ... Just to keep her in line. ;)
Also needs an epilogue to get an idea of what their day-to-day lives are like a year later.
Very much looking forward to more.
PS: Make sure to add a 'cuckquean' tag. Hard for those with the fetish to find great stories like this if they're not tagged.
Virgin girls can't be sluts? Well this story proves otherwise. Luckily her boyfriend doesn't mind. 5/5
This is an excellent story, fresh and creative and I would love to read many more like this.
The writing is very rough. The spelling, grammar and difficult flow really take away from the enjoyment of reading it.
The storyline to me rated more than 5 stars but the difficult read brought it down to a 3.
Thank you for writing and posting here.
That was amazing. I've never read a more intense humiliation scene. It just wouldn't stop. 5 stars.
The story is good but the writing mechanics are pretty awful. You seriously need an editor to go through it and correct all of the many grammar and spelling mistakes.
Please at least do a few proofreading passes before posting next time.
It's so cool to read a cuckqueaning story like this where the Cuckcake is the dominant, I just wish there were more. Many of the best ones are only accessible through Amazon, etc but in this a great storyline where the Cuckcake is in charge rather than the Husband/boyfriend. Thank You so much for writing it, I can't wait to read the 2nd part now!
Had to quit part way through because it just made me so angry. I despise bullies. If it had all been fully consensual it would have been a different matter.
Tess (UK)