All Comments on 'An Eye Opener For Tony'

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Sex4LfSex4Lfover 10 years ago

Good story and the sex was hot but you have to admit that that's one fucked up family. Hope that there's a sequel and they all get it in together!

risingthunderboltrisingthunderboltover 10 years ago
Cool Camera thing

His R/S with mom was more worthful than his sis

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

really enjoyed a good story and not just the screw you family and that is it..would like to read more...thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Just delete the first paragraph

The technology exists...all you would need is money.

Nice story!

rancoorrancoorover 10 years ago

(...).."her clean shaven pussy. At least in his imagination she was clean shaven."..

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Oh my God ! - One more kid, with the "shaveN" brains!!

rufriterrufriterover 10 years agoAuthor
To Rancoor

Just for your benefit Rancoor, (Verbatim from from the Oxford English Dictionary)

Shaven; - (adj) a. Closely shaved or tonsured b. (in combination) Clean shaven.

I suggest you check your facts before making snide remarks about the grammar and semantics of other people

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Agree with Rifriter

@Rancoor

Learn about the language you supposedly speak so well before you criticise correct use and spelling in others; get a dictionary and a thesaurus (you know, the one that's not a dictionary, look it up), who knows, perhaps you could even teach the rest of your semi-literate chimp friends a thing or two...

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 10 years ago
rufriter, if you can manage to, I would love to read more

Great start, not sure how to keep it going but I really want more.

Please consider it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great ending -- leave us dreaming

You'll get requests to continue this one, but I think the ending was perfect.

homerjayhomerjayover 10 years ago
thank you

very nice story. thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I love

a happy ending :)

rufriterrufriterover 10 years agoAuthor
Good point but....

@ happybrother. You may have a point, but there are major drawbacks.

Blackmailing Dad for a better job could have a snowball effect.

Dad has just realised he had forgotten how sexy and what a good fuck his wife is. If he is in a shit with Tony, it could spill over into their home life, making everyone miserable.

A wife who is miserable - as opposed to just sexually neglected - seldom feels in the mood to fuck.

Not only does Dad no longer get into her pants, but he could take out his bad moods on his daughter, making her so miserable that she no longer feels like fucking either.

The end result is everyone is at each other's throats, so nobody gets any.

shoeslayershoeslayerover 10 years ago
HOT story

Well rufriter has done it again, another

hot story, Seems I otta keep a fire

extinguisher near the computer in

case the hard drive gets so turned

on it melts.

I bet Tony could not believe what he wired into his

computer! seeing Dad and daughter going at it

and then getting some from BIG SIS.

GREAT story ! Thanks Rufus.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Soon?

Okay, I've waited two weeks, whats the hold-up? Getting blue balls waiting for the next chapter. LOL

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
It's been a long time

I wish you'd write a second chapter. This is one of my 'Go'to' stories to get off. I'd always imagined that part two would involve sister telling brother that she wants Mom too, and he says he can help. First HE Fucks Mom, them goes to sis for clean-up. After sis sucks him off she says she wants it from the source, soThen He fucks mom and brings sis in to clean HER up,

And one day weeks later, after mom cleans him up with her tongue, he asks if she likes the taste of pussy or just does it for him.

ToughSailorToughSailor4 months ago

Good story, but definitely requires another chapter . . . .

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