All Comments on 'An Incest Birthday Ch. 02'

by kevin_88

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ansdguyansdguyover 13 years ago
Not bad....

No one is two words, btw.

Nemesist64Nemesist64over 13 years ago

Awesome chapter, Can't wait for the next.

dezurtdawgdezurtdawgover 13 years ago
No way!

No way did he go back to his room and think "Did I just screw my little sister?" Hell man, she's only "1 hour" younger than he is. He would have thought, 'did I just screw my twin sister?'

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
rushed

way to rushed. slow down and take your time. Also use spell check and this story will have a lot more hits

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
spell check?

when anonymous suggested you use "spell check", I couldn't help but think that perhaps the kettle should not call the pan black. The term "way too much" does require the second o, OK?

prop69prop69over 5 years ago
WOW..WHAT A SURPRISE

OK

Can't wait until tomorrow

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