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Click hereNow the tricky part of all of this, how do I go about using this information? Do I come right out and throw it in their face and make them do whatever I want, or do I play stupid and act like I don't know a thing? No, I can't pass this up, I own them now, and I wouldn't be Ashley if I didn't make them suffer. You would think you'd hide pictures of you kissing your brother and your hand on his dick better than that, but I guess not, and those are just the lesser pictures, I'm gonna have a field day whenever I go after them.
I closed my door and scrolled through the pictures again. one things for sure, they both had nice bodies, especially Rita, I could see myself doing a few things to her. Maybe that's what I'll do! I could make them both my sex slaves, or make them have sex in front of me, or in front of random people, oh the possibilities! I got up and grabbed a pen and paper to write all my ideas down, with so many ideas running through my head I wanted to make sure I wrote everything down and didn't leave anything out. I can see it now, Rita and Randy fucking each other in my living room while all my friends watched, oh this is gonna be so much fun!
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoFinally, we knew Ashley was nasty and now we know for sure. Hope R&R get past this and keep up the love making for each other
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoThe whole thing with Ashley's knowledge on the incest couple is scary if it were real life, but hot when it's erotica. There aren't enough stories like this where an enemy has this kind of power over an incest couple. I wish there were more and I can't wait to see what Ashley has in store for them. I actually want for her to have them fuck in front of her friends like she said.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI would keep reading this if the author would quit fucking Randy over and turning him into a grubbling apologist. It's really kind of fucked up how you wrote him dumb enough to fall for that. I'm going to go out on a limb here and say people that much in love with a forbidden relationship don't do dumb shit as much as you have this guy do.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoWhat the hell dude. I loved this story for so long and just found out today that there are more chapters after Ch18 and find that Rita and Randy's lives are now completlly fucked. Unless they find some damning evidence on Ashly FAST then thier lives are going to be under her controll forever. My option is when she shows that she has the eveidence is that A.) Randy beats her ass and destroys all of the evidence he can find and takes Rita's phone or B.) They act indifferent and dont care what she does with it. PLS do not screw thier story up. I want to remain a fan of this great story.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI like how the twist of the story goes, but please please please for the sake of vanilla fans don't make the story spiral down to tragedy!
Sure wish this series has a happy ending, it's been so well thus far, and there's not much happy ending for sibling lovers round here. Perhaps you could introduce a new character to neutralise Ashley, preferably a boy or something.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoKevin, Ashley tricked Randy into cheating on his girlfriend, why? We know her reasons, but the thing is she is acting like Angelica Pickles instead of a human being. Her motivations are vague and she acts less like a character and more like a DC villain. Why? What is going on with her? She's so cartoonishly evil that it really fractures the plot. Also I understand that Randy's infidelity is heartbreaking, but the fact that almost nobody is willing to give him the benefit of the doubt makes them also seem cruel.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoYou have a boy, his sister, his mother, his aunt all in an incestuous relationship and you give a person like Ashley the keys to the kingdom...Why? A person as truly evil as you have depicted Ashley to be will stop at nothing. Even if you somehow write a plot where Randy and Rita somehow stop her from sharing the dirt Ashley found on Rita's phone, (which is the most craziest thing about this chapter btw...a teenage girl that doesn't use the lock function on her phone..especially with incriminating evidence of her relationship with her brother...c'mon man that's like saying the Pope doesn't pray...it just doesn't happen) She can and will fuck up their life just by spreading rumors and saying that she knows they are fucking...you have put up a hurtle that is insurmountable short of Ashley death in a fiery inferno that burns her and all the evidence up...Rita and Randy are screwed. I wish you luck in fixing this but unless Ashley and the evidence she has found is completely removed and soon you've just ruined your story. All I can say is that I hope someone like Chris comes to the rescue and plays Ashley to reveal something as equally juicy about her life, like boning her dad or something, othewise....you just tko'd your own series.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThe direction you are going with the story is very interesting. While reading this latest chapter ideas popped in my mind of different outcomes that would result from this chapter. Can't wait to see if I guessed the correct one! Keep on writing. I hope the next chapter comes out soon.
P.S. As for Ashley she needs to have some common sense knocked into her.
kevin_88almost 10 years agoAuthorSome of these comments are funny. What does everyone think I'll do, kill everybody off? No. Stuff like this has to happen in a story, bad stuff has to happen for it to be a good story. It won't be believable otherwise.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agowith 900,000,000 handguns floating around, these kind of events is what's responsible for more then 4,000,000 shooting deaths each year in the USA. not to say that someone like psychopath Ashley don't deserve it tho before she goes on to destroy everything around her
