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All Comments on 'An Innocent Gem'

by MidnightBRose

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great start more please :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very good story so far

Please try to make it longer if u are willing too. If you need idea's look at the story's of colleen thomas or evil alpaca if u haven't already that is. Just don't copyright please.

MidnightBRoseMidnightBRoseover 12 years agoAuthor
Thankus!

Thank you for the comments!! This is my first one, plus it is the introduction into the main story, so the next one shall be longer for sure!!! But, thank you again!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
good 1

keep going!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good Story

A very good story....the innocence taken from Gem was one that is desired by most...Great job on this

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