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Tail End PeteTail End Peteabout 15 years ago
Well, okay... I guess.

Too much jumping around and loss of continuity... such as he puts his finger inside her and then deflowers her with it since he never put his cock up her. Go back to the basics and make an outline first. It will help keep things straight. And for heavens sake, learn to breathe.

Tail End Pete

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