All Comments on 'An Intergalactic Halloween'

this definitely begs a part 2, WONDERFUL lead up and all, even the ending was great, but i cant help but feel this story completely and totally deserves a ch2 or maybe even lots more...

GJ author, GJ

This story is great. I gave it a 5

the others! definitely deserves a part 2 or more! well done!

Since this story would truely earn them all!!! As several others have metioned, a chapter two could EASILY work for this story!

Anyway good luck in the contest, this should be at the very least be a top five if not top.

i loved the story was well written and very entertaining

Thanks to everyone who commented and voted! I don't really even care if I don't win anything because this was enjoyable to write regardless.

As for chapter 2, I had only written this specifically for the contest, however, I have been considering going and making this into a series. I've wanted for a while to change gears and write an erotic series with build up and character development and this may be my opportunity to do that for this site.

So yeah, I am greatly considering chapter 2. Maybe a post-Halloween continuation for Nick and Val? :P

Thanks again, I love hearing feedback :)

Loved the story.

I hope you do write a second chapter because this was a perfect start of a series.

it was perhaps a bit silly in the sense that she was mostly human out of a fantasy. Also, is concern for contraception seems a bit unlikely. Hybridization between species is difficult on Earth, let alone between aliens.

I very much enjoyed this story. Please keep writing you have talent and will get better

Great story would love to see a continuation with nick and Val

I greatly enjoyed this sappy/spooky tale, and would happily read the continuation should you find yourself inclined to write it.

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Really nicely told, absolutely brilliant bent on the vamp classic.. I hope you write more.

I absolutely loved this story and my only request would be that you write a continuation to it.

I loved this story. It does however seem a bit unfinished. What happens next?

Very well written and good bend on the classic vamp. Keep up the good work! =)

You should get a series started this is publishing gold!!!

My first comment ever here on Lit, but I got to say, one of the best stories I've ever read.

Please do us the honour and write more chapters!

I recently found intergalactic mate swap and then I looked up your profile and found this story. I have to give credit when its due and it's definitely do for these great stories you have written.

This has the makings of one helluva good serial! Well done :-)

This story and the other An Intergalactic Mate Swap (which i read first) have been some of the best stories i've read. I hope that there will be more of both stories, and even more from the universe they are set in.

A definite 5 star story.

this was a damn good read, there was good character description and development. good plot line... great ending... gotta be a sap for love. >.< XD

I loved this story! It is just screaming for a sequel.

Best story ever. needs a sequel

And I totally agree with the others, This needs a lot of follow on stories.

Wow,beautifully written,erotic ass hell.wish I could find myself a female like that

I really enjoyed this story and would love to see you continue this story. They would make a great couple and would bring trust to the Yvon. Please consider a sequel.

I love it hope there will be a part 2 or more

This is actually really well written.

Like it

Pretty romantic story. Pity real vampires are not so tender

Nice

I hope you will write part two sometime in the future.

I do wish you would do another story set in the universe.

Guy is an idiot

The concept of aliens loving Halloween is great. I do think it's stupid of Nick to be willing to trust Val with his life after knowing her for a few hours, but it turned out well enough.

Not an idiot but she was capable of trust when she was willing to leave instead of tricking him behind closed doors to attack instead and even said for him to break her neck to break free. And even GA e her back story and showed remorse so again how I is he an idiot

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Que Romantique!

11/10!!!!!