by Et2bruttus
This was great ready I sure hope you do make more I would love to see more of these charactors.
P.s. have you ever thought about seeing if you can turn this into a story maybe make some drama and maybe you could make some story describing how the couples came together
Another spectacular story and to be able to have it mesh with your An Intergalactic Halloween is a nice mix! I am waiting to see if you continue with either of these great stories
Loved Intergalactic Halloween, but not fond of the whole "wife swap" theme here and I also agreed with Liz about the kissing, let alone cumming inside the other spouses. Overall I didn't like the story though the characters involved have nice potential, just wish it was separate and not wife-swap but that's me with my humble opinion, as I know some will rather enjoy stories like these (I'm just not one of them). Instead of a sequel to this, I'd much rather see a sequel to an intergalactic halloween and watch their experiences as they visit each others planets and meet family and friends. Personal bias on the theme aside, one thing I have to critique on this piece that I disliked was the whole swapping from one couple to the other every other paragraph or 2. I understand you were writing it that way to incorporate the whole foursome thing and let us know everything happening in the room at once, but I found this style highly annoying to read as it gets distracting. No offense to your writing style and such, overall you have a good style that I enjoy reading but just some thoughts and reasons on why I personally didn't enjoy the story as much as I could have. There were still parts I did like about the story but I wouldn't read it a second time. Sorry and thanks for your time, keep up the good work!
I wish there was more interspecies stories like this. No abductions, no mind control drugs, just straight up consensual sex! Hope to see more!
This was great, a sequel Is almost mandatory with a story like that