All Comments on 'An Island, A Horny Family Stranded'

While the premise itself was okay I must note that the author could benefit greatly from using an editor to clean up the story. Typos, grammatical errors and poor punctuation made it somewhat difficult to read what was, otherwise, a fairly good tale.

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If there's going to be a continuation of this story, PLEASE ensure that it is well proofed and clean. Believe it or not, doing so has a sincere impact on how well a story is received.

Hey bud well done story never mund mr grammer. It's a very good story very realistic. I doubt that in a real type story that the characters would sound like they swallowed a dictionary, and went to proper grammer school.

Great work. Even though it needs a proof reader, I still gave it a "5" because so few writers do such a great job of seduction in a believable story. I hope you continue writing. You tell a good story.

I really like the plot. The story would be more erotic if you would have described more details of the sex.

Some of us come to this site because we find the stories to be entertaining. If one is looking for literary perfection the public libraries have stacks of classic literature. You have written a really good story that was an enjoyable read. Keep up your good work and screw all the damned critics. One of the best writers on this site (my friend Jessy19) surely couldn't give a rat's ass about literary perfection and would tell you about yourself, if that was your only criticism of her work. Be assured that most of us out here will quickly become fans, if you continue to write stories of this quality. Thank you for your work.

good premise and writing but not enough sexual description for my taste.

Not bad but it ended rather abruptly.

I liked the story, and the grammar and spelling didn't seem atrocious to me, but it's pretty distracting when you use the wrong word in a phrase or saying.

ie. it's not a "faithful" day it's a "fateful" day

You said uncompromising position, when one would think it would be quite a compromising position, etc.

On the whole, great story though.

Too soon. Don't end there. You have an excellent scenario built up. Now is not the time for rescue. It's time for more dad daughter/ mom son and finally orgy.

gramer &spelling so what . fools weat perfick well dont reed litearotica stories. stoped 2 soon . lot of milagr in this .onley weite 2/3 pages at a timr welldone worth lot more than 5

A good story, i loved reading it but you need some one to check for errors, grammer and spelling. I'm not the best either!!! keep tying

A wonderful first story. I was hoping for a foursome or swapping partners. Mother daughter and freedoms but it's your story and it was good.more please !

GOOD...QUATRO ESTRELLAS!

I love shipwrecked stories, Marooned !! I can't believe that this has such a low rating of 4.3 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟