All Comments on 'An Old Friend'

Hi.Wonderful story. Real Hot. I am partial to red heads with red toenail polish since I am a redhead with red toenail polish. Thanks for the story. Keep it up...lol

Great story. I'm a blonde not a redhead but the fucking was hot. Keep up your storyline with these old friends. Make them get better and hotter as friends...lol. Thanks for your stories and keep writing.

One Hot Story!

Since I don't find big girls sexy, I couldn't give it a 4 or a 5. Therefore, I didn't think it fair to give it a rating.

This is a well-written short story, with appealing characters. However, other stories by this author do far more justice to his talent. This reviewer finds his Charmaine/Danny series to be outstanding in every respect, and one of the greatest love stories ever published on the site, and it is highly recommended. His newer stories, such as Kissing Cousins, continue and even improve on the author's overall excellence. (His other stories, published and available from Amazon, are also outstanding). Authors such as X-Factor are truly a blessing to so many fortunate readers.