All Comments on 'An Old Lamp, A New Life'

by iluvitall

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

Great start. You were correct you have many possbilities.

Waiting for the next installment.

mBrowmBrowover 11 years ago
Very nice start

Kyle --> Devin seems a very lucky fellow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I kinda feel bad for him

Even though he is a super stud, I feel like he is going to experience heartbreak or loneliness in future chapters. Sooner or later he is going to miss his family and friends, assuming he was close with them.

cryforhelpcryforhelpover 11 years ago
markup error - entire first page is bold

Please clean up the markup error making the entire first page show as bold. I'll try to read it some other way, but this is really annoying.

iluvitalliluvitallover 11 years agoAuthor
Story formatting

I'm not sure why the first page is all bold. The story was submitted in rtf format. Therefore, it was formatted manually by Literotica. I am sorry if it is difficult to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Never thought oF the surprise genie thingee.

Best part was the two girls and the guy. Jim EXHAUSTING them. Every guys dream

Probably will be very predictable.

Good look.

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