All Comments on 'An Ordinary Life Ch. 01'

Although written from the voyeurs standpoint, I found myself reading it as though I was Erin, with thousands of unseen eyes watching me. Wonderfully erotic.

I had a mom like that years ago. We didn't have the videos then, but my friend and I loved to peak!

Years ago I used to watch mt future mother-in-law,get her self off like this.Looking back I think she saw me watching, as about 3 months after I first saw her do it,She had me fucking her.Can still see her as I did the first time legs up ,cucumber in her hole pulling on a nipple.

This is a fantastic story line. I can't wait for more episodes.

Really great lead into many more stories!! (I hope?) I see a little blackmail and gang bang in the future. This story could even get the "team sprit" involved? Keep writing....

Very hot original theme. Hope the next chapters are longer. Please keep the online part as much as what the boys do to her.

does he have a youbg aunt to bring into the story.

This is a very erotic story, I hope it continues as well as it has started!

Well done.

hope the next is just as good

Super story idea! Can't wait for the next installment.

Very good story line. Wish she had a full natural bush, but that's okay. Hope he has her dress up in heels and pantyhose in front of a full length mirror. She has the crotch carefully cut out because of her hot date. Her lovely mound pouches out so nicely and the boys beat off like crazy as she runs her index finger through her girl fur driving the guys wild and the customers too. Yahoooo

i loved reading that, got to hard ,my sister walked by the door i didnt see her but she sure saw me and wacthed the whole thing ,NEVER CAME SO MUCH IN MY LIFE