All Comments on 'An Uncomfortable Customer'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
grammar, grammar grammar

Little things like attention to grammar distract from the story - passed, not past. It is taut, not taught.

All in all it has the potential to be a good story. Keep trying.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
....A SPECIAL FIRST MEETING !!! ::::: [[[[[[[

..... Diego needs to open a massage studio a blocks from Sarah's dormatory at her all womens college and let us know what happens after his complimentory three margarita massages !!!

spankfunforspankfunforabout 8 years ago
Lucky Sarah!

Sally Saw What Sarah Received for 2 Long Minutes! She Wants The Same, Maybe With Her Daughter! Family Together And ALL That!

Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
Another

Fuck story.

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