All Comments on 'An Undeniable Passion Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Bravo

This story is absolutely wonderful, it warms my heart and makes me all gigglely inside. HEE HEE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
BUTTERFLIES!

OMG THIS IS SO WONDERFUL! I had butterflies in my own stomach just thinking about it! OH & I cant imagine what would happen if he was invited to her Wedding Ball! And why doesnt she just tell him her trouble & hope that he would propose.....I'm sorry its your story I just hope to see more of them together in the next chapter! Awesome work! Bravo! ~Sparkles~

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Don't leave me hanging!! Please write some more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
So tasteful

i can't believe how erotic and tantalizing a story of such 'harmless' sexual activities (compared to much other happenings on this site) can be, when told by such an expert narrator as you are. Hat's off to you opels

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Beautiful.

Beautiful.

joodlejoodleabout 12 years ago
mmm

Mmm. That is one yummy leading man. Thank you!

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