All Comments on 'An Unexpected Development'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
ok tale

a little humor in your tale loved it

LadyFalconLadyFalconabout 13 years ago
It was like giving a box of chocolates to a diabetic.

roflmao....hilarious...my favorite line. Good story, I liked your first one better. Keep up the good work.

estragonestragonabout 13 years ago
Good, Cute and Hot

Nice job, well done.

3grandkids3grandkidsabout 13 years ago
If only

If only reality could live up to the fantasy this story inspires!!!

cheetahgrl_07cheetahgrl_07about 13 years ago
that was cute

i liked this story hope you continue...

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