All Comments on 'An Unexpected Encounter'

I liked it very much. Just enough character development, without overdoing it, and I enjoyed your description of the hot, albeit brief, sexual action. I'm not really much of a litererary critiquer, but I know what I like. Keep up the good work.

I enjoyed it very much well written and could be extended. As the other comment i know what i like and this did it for me.

i think these two make a very cute couple and i would be very interested in reading more about them (p.s. Pretty amazing for your first try)