by victoriawhita
Very creative, I would love to be asked out this way. Seems more safe, fun, and interesting than a direct question. Sometimes the shy guys are the best.
I even changed my rating from a 50 to a 75. Your writings are very well gathered together. My only suggestion is that "Victoria" would be a *cog* in "Brian"s wheel, not a "clog".
Very sweet and enjoyable story. But, sadly it ended so soon! We felt that there should of been a part two?