All Comments on 'An Unlikely Valentine'

by tk5555

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benjie4benjie4over 3 years ago

Outstanding ! ! !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Nice one

Pretty lucky valentine for him

phd70phd70over 9 years ago
Good Tale, But???

Seemed that the story deserved a little more finale. But a fine story! Thanks, tk5555.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Amazing story

Thank you! Well written and HOT!

tk5555tk5555over 10 years agoAuthor
The rest of the story

There are not chapters for this story but there are other stories with the same characters.

-TK

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Excellent!

This was in Feb 2013 but no chapter 2 or sequel, damn this was great.

YDB95YDB95about 11 years ago
Great backstory, great sex

Hope there's a sequel!

NickatplayNickatplayover 11 years ago
Fantastic!

That was a great story, well written. It needs a follow up, because she seems to want more of his cock! Well done!

MRSheaMRSheaover 11 years ago
Great!

Good Job well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hhmmm maybe a part two

this nerd needs to end up with the cheerleader....

maybe she realizes she has stronger feelings for him...

maybe she'll end up pregnant...

nerd + cheerleader = happily ever after

just look at "revenge of the nerds"

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Can i have some more please

Great story. Maybe it was I was a nerd, but with just average equipment. I hope he is as lucky as I have been!

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 11 years ago
Way to go Carrie!

Nerds need loving too. As it turned out, Carl and Carrie both benefited by Carrie befriending him. Now that they're together, we want another chapter to learn what happened after the senior prom.

Great story, and good luck in the Valentine's contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Thanks!

I was a Carl in a lot of ways. Your story helped me remember what an amazing experience it was, although it took more than one night to have all of the experiences in the story. Good story, even without my peculiar perspective.

hoo_hoo_boohoo_hoo_booover 11 years ago

Lovely writing . Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Chapter 2 coming soon

I hope to see more chapters soon.

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