by scarlet_letter87
Yeah, my paragraphs tend to follow the activity, almost like a scene, but thank you for the suggestion.
I really enjoyed reading this, I'm very much in the anal play.
Love reading then cumming thinking it was my cock
Steve
I am quite looking forward to it myself - as long as you tell us all about it in detail as you have here! A most enjoyable and entertaining story, for which my thanks and four stars.
Do be careful about the length of some of your paragraphs, though; huge blocks of text are difficult to read and can be off-putting, even with a good story behind them.
Thank you for posting this for us.