All Comments on 'Anal Sex: The Penis Perspective'

That was funny!

Good concept; not that well executed. Story doesn't flow, some grammatical errors.

You ANAL lovers take note. Having your cock deep into somebody's shit hole stinks. It is dangerous to your health. If is a female shithole that you are in then it most likely is painful for her. Finally she certainly gets no pleasure from it even if she lies and says she did.

Thought it was a really neat story and well written with good humour!

Kinda funny. Not hilarios though. But I'm being boring, humour is usually not found so often on literotica. I hope you try it again, us readers can use some more.

There was a comment here about anal being bad for your health and never appreciated by the girl. Geeeee-sus! What was she/he, a fundamentalist?

I imagine the man G-sus being alive today, blogging away about ending war and loving your neighbor but not his wife, but I don't imagine him giving the intimate act of anal sex between a man and a woman much of a thought though.

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Pretty funny stuff ..a little humor is good...For the woman who commented, obviously knows nothing about other women....Some women absolutely LOVE anal sex and it is not dangerous nor painful.............ignorance ! Geez...And by the way this is fantasy land...duhhhh

I thought your story had a very undertone. However, puking - why not say what it is....Your story jumped around too much and not enough flow. Some of the words not engaging. But, overall funny - this could be a great one. As far as anal, not sure if this story was heter or homo....and if you haven't tried anal play women, it will cause you penetrating unbelievable orgasm.

I liked the perspective the writer took. But I really want to tell "Marilyn37MWF" that if the man doesn't take time and is careful, anal sex is painful and dangerous. But when a man is a considerate lover, it can be an interesting and extremely pleasurable experience for both.

It is obvious that "Marilyn37MWF" hasn't had a considerate lover and with her attitude, it's a wonder she's had any couples sex at all.

That was actually kind of cute. Granted, some of the crevices are nasty, but some get cleaned just for the purpose of spelunking. Love that word. And as for the anal aspect of it? Yes, it hurts...but if you can't relax, it hurts even worse. Been there, done that. First time with hubby was horrible. Last two times though? Awesome....and I am looking forward to more.

Very clever play on the adventures of somebody's penis.

Lol thanks for the smile

Delightfully different.