All Comments on 'Anari's Predicament Ch. 12'

by ScarlettSlave

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wow

Really fabulous you have capttured the lifestlye of a slave lovely. Adored it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellent story...

,,,but work on your continuity. (I daresay it is pretty much physically impossible to both pull one's buttocks apart and then to clasp hands behind one's neck without some fairly acrobatic gyrations in between if the starting point is "hands cuffed behind back".)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great!

loved your stories they are very hot i was captivated by every single one of them. thank you :) -sub girl

barmaid10barmaid10about 10 years ago

Holy shit! That was right on the money!

GialloFanGialloFanover 4 years ago
Story is good.... but

Im so sick of these less than 1 page chapters, this story could have been combined into 6 2 page segments and it would have been so much better.

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