by the_hemingway
You obviously live in or have been to Vancouver several times. This was a great little romantic tale. I assume this will be a continuing saga of some sort - you left plenty of room for additional chapters.
You need an editor or at least a proofreader; there were a few missing words in sentences but it didn't sink the story.
Please keep going. I want to see where Kady's story takes us.
But the sex -- when it happened -- ahppened much too fast. No making out. No touching and feeling before getting naked. No shyness, No reticense, No how it felt to her and how it felt to him. No needing to be convinced to touch his cock and needing instruction on how to make him feel good.
Don't rush the sex. It's the trip, not the arrival, that's exciting.
Good story! Very sexy and casual but loving! Will there be another chapter (or more?)?