by Harddaysknight
Congratulations to the Bensons on their love, lust, loyalty and very healthy marriage, we should all be so lucky. Too bad reality ain't so.👺
Story is great, but it ends so abruptly it looks like it was truncated by mistake.
My girlfriend picked me up at the SFO airport . Damn She looked good in that Blonde wig . A couple of our friends did not realize she was my wife . The funny part is now he picks her up at Bars . And Yes She uses my wives wig .
Mildred Simon, one of the religious, presumably prudish board members: "It's regrettable that those pictures of you are circulating. Especially when you look so good, but your face can't be recognized in them!"
Great little story, funny ending!
They should have given him and his wife a week in Vegas all expenses paid . I agree wit him about people calling My wife a slut . I would not put up with it either .
This was a great story. Right up to the end, I did not believe that it was Donna in those pictures. But when she removed her raincoat and was naked underneath, she destroyed all doubt. Great story. I did not expect that ending. Five stars, for sure.
Great story. Well developed and told. I have not read one that ended like this. Also by reading some of the comment I learned how spell the word STUPID. Writers in this category go through a lot of crap to tell their stories. I for one really appreciate the effort this good. I give xhristianj credit for using his name, however I falls lame when all you say is stupid with no substance or example. Very lame indeed ,,,,
Insanely LUCKY Dan, in so many ways! If only any normal real life husband was ever so BLESSED.
Great story, well written and a plot that is so different, the characters are in the main how I see most responding in real life.
xhristianjabout 1 year ago
Sorry stupid Premise stupid Story and just generally STUPID
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TRUTHFUL
Truly Stupid commenter, stupid comment, in general, a weak minded, extremely jealous excessively and angry individual wishing he was as talented a writer. That jealousy floods the page in green.
Great writing! Great plot and well told, but wife is an exhibitionist and most husbands would be furious and embarrassed over her antic. To me, that scene was well over the top.
I know, its just a story and I'm a prude.
Ken in Texas
Brilliant story and plot. A bit OTT at the end but it didn't detract from a truly great short story. BardnotBard
Now that's a loving wife. And a loving husband. Both of them willing to make huge sacrifices, such as their job and suffering huge embarrassment, to protect their spouse from harm. Brings a tear to your eye. ;)