by Harddaysknight
Now that's a loving wife. And a loving husband. Both of them willing to make huge sacrifices, such as their job and suffering huge embarrassment, to protect their spouse from harm. Brings a tear to your eye. ;)
Brilliant story and plot. A bit OTT at the end but it didn't detract from a truly great short story. BardnotBard
Great writing! Great plot and well told, but wife is an exhibitionist and most husbands would be furious and embarrassed over her antic. To me, that scene was well over the top.
I know, its just a story and I'm a prude.
Ken in Texas
xhristianjabout 1 year ago
Sorry stupid Premise stupid Story and just generally STUPID
****
TRUTHFUL
Truly Stupid commenter, stupid comment, in general, a weak minded, extremely jealous excessively and angry individual wishing he was as talented a writer. That jealousy floods the page in green.
Great story, well written and a plot that is so different, the characters are in the main how I see most responding in real life.
Insanely LUCKY Dan, in so many ways! If only any normal real life husband was ever so BLESSED.
Great story. Well developed and told. I have not read one that ended like this. Also by reading some of the comment I learned how spell the word STUPID. Writers in this category go through a lot of crap to tell their stories. I for one really appreciate the effort this good. I give xhristianj credit for using his name, however I falls lame when all you say is stupid with no substance or example. Very lame indeed ,,,,
This was a great story. Right up to the end, I did not believe that it was Donna in those pictures. But when she removed her raincoat and was naked underneath, she destroyed all doubt. Great story. I did not expect that ending. Five stars, for sure.
They should have given him and his wife a week in Vegas all expenses paid . I agree wit him about people calling My wife a slut . I would not put up with it either .
Mildred Simon, one of the religious, presumably prudish board members: "It's regrettable that those pictures of you are circulating. Especially when you look so good, but your face can't be recognized in them!"
Great little story, funny ending!
My girlfriend picked me up at the SFO airport . Damn She looked good in that Blonde wig . A couple of our friends did not realize she was my wife . The funny part is now he picks her up at Bars . And Yes She uses my wives wig .
Story is great, but it ends so abruptly it looks like it was truncated by mistake.
Congratulations to the Bensons on their love, lust, loyalty and very healthy marriage, we should all be so lucky. Too bad reality ain't so.👺
How dare they have a great sex life and even enjoy role play after being married for more than two decades? For goodness sake, don't they know they're too old for that?
Simply scandalous...
I be so befuddled it wouldn't be fair for me to score this one. Reckon I'll go get me a beer and read the next story
But kind of falls flat at the end. Would have liked blackmailed served a cold dish of revenge somehow.
There are very dumb few HDK stories that I don't like. This was a really good one.
I do admire the dark angel's ability to keep reading my stories and making childish complaints about each one. He is not surprised that the dozens of my stories he has read do not end as he would like. I am not surprised he keeps reading and bitching. I am amused. I like to keep getting views and comments. He's a big help. Thanks, Angel!
Oh what a surprise. LazyDaysKnight didn't continue after climax. That's different.
Good twist on another LW story. There are stories posted here where the wife truly is loving and not a cheating bitch. Good writing
It is a very small quibble, but exactly WHERE is the ‘adventurous wife?’ In all fairness, if it were posted in any other category, it would not fly so well!
5*
Another one I seem to have missed, and another great twist from HDK. Reading out my *5 key.
Speaking of Q, a query if you please: which stories continue to get comments 13 years after they are posted? Only the good ones I would venture.
I'm loving the stories but loving more the fact that the titles all revolve around Beatles songs. Bravo.............. :-)
Did have slight problem with her disrobing but she did it voluntary and he was proud of her body
So no harm no penalty
In the world, it would be a better place, so obviously I enjoyed it. Ohh, Donna...She was named after one of the very best true love songs from the golden age of rock and roll. Signed: BTW
This isn't the authors best, but it is pretty good.
Sexual harassment. I notice you are anonymous. They didn't keep the files. The dumbass thieves took them and distributed them. Moral issues are in most contracts. They aren't used unless needed. The wife chose to disrobe for her husbands job. They neither expected her to nor asked. You can't have it both ways. You don't like it? Then don't read it and put up uninformed drivel like you know what you are talking about.
I'm just glad this wasn't another loving wives betrayal story.
I cant believe they were so flabbergasted that I would sue them over them making my wife strip in front of them to keep my job, I also couldnt believe they were so stupid as to not destroy all evidence of that board meeting
By the time my lawyer was done with that "family" business they had to sell their precious recipe to avoid bankrupcy, and I got so much money not even my grandchildren would ever have to work a day in their lives
Pricing once again the author (a) has no spine; (b) enjoys sucking creampies after watching from the closet; (c) obviously likes to insult readers by providing mind-numbing drivel like this crap.
Not even funny. -10 stars!
I don't know what everyone else was reading, but I thought this story was very entertaining!
can never be blackmailed or slandered,,,,,they can....but the consequences for being wronged are severe, TK U MLJ LV NV
Story did not do it for me. "Ridiculous" came to mind after I read it. First off, did not feel his extreme reluctance to reveal her identity. Then read comments. So yeah, maybe. But that led on to:. just tell blackmailers "that's my wife, so nothing will really come of your revelation."
Secondly, did not get the tiff in boardroom over her age. Pics too young for 44 YO? Then so is the wife who is standing in front of them (if she's the one on pics). If both are too young for 44, then that's evidence pics and wife are same. But the story has them disbelieving because reality is 44. It is foolish to compare REALITY of wife to appearance of pics. Instead compare APPEARANCE of wife to appearance of pics.
I'll try to check back. Maybe someone can show why these holes are not real holes to keep it from doing it for me.
Paul in Oklahoma
"BORDERING" on slander...??
They as much as called him and her liars and Robinson called his wife a slut...
Plus, if they've forwarded the pictures which were obtained illegally, they could probably make a case for invasion of privacy...
As for the bonus, sure, you could argue he was doing what they paid him for... but they didn't pay him to be insulted and embarrassed to protect them...
You could also argue no one knew the bad guy would send the pictures anyway, but if he hadn't and if they'd found out the formula was bogus, he'd have still had the negative repercussions to his life... and that kind of bonus doesn't feel like it repaid him for that risk...
But liked the story...
Kind of an awkward final paragraph to wrap up an otherwise fun romp.
There is an obvious lack of ending here. Excellent, simply excellent, up to the absence of a clear ending. Lose 1 star. 4 is all I can give you.
I sort of expected the wife to have faked the freckle and tattoo to save her husband's job, then round on him afterwards 😀
Congrats. Well done and very amusing. Four out of five. I suspected something was up when the blackmailers mentioned they hired a hooker but he picked up the head head instead. I think it would be less over the top and more believable if the wife was was wearing nothing but a bra and panties under the coat. Also a little fear and hesitation by her in taking off her coat would be appropriate. It would be a little sexier if you described their loving making in a bit more detail. But those are minor complaints.
Great story.
The additional storyline you are thinking of is "And I Love Her" by rpsuch.
Great work HDK.
I am sure I read some more of this story where Robinson turned out to be the bad one
So I gave it another 5
It is still a great read from a good writer we need to see more from LOL
To be taken with a smile not seriously and you will enjoy this story immensely
"Look at the freckles on the left breast. Then look at the little tattoo just above the pussy my husband is so enthusiastically paying lip service. Then compare them with this!"
Wow that's hot. It's pure fantasy but so erotic.
they came to a bad conclusion even in doubting the wife making her strip.. he should have let them firing him and sue for millions
to much hummilation,should have sued company for slander and false accusations
It"s good to see a husband and wife on the same side for a change.
Yet another great effort and an intriguing plot. I was assuming all along that the blackmail photos were somehow manipulated, as Dan did not seem to have the personality or morals to commit to a casual hookup. How these photos were explained, and the rather extreme lengths that the wife went through to save her husband's job and reputation were entertaining and heartwarming.
I gave this a very high rating. It was a well written and entertaining story. And yet again DWornock is an ass.
Once again the oblivious tool posts incoherent comments and elicits laughter and ridicule.
The story prior to the meeting conflicts with what occured after the meeting.
Sending the photos after receiving the information would not occur because he then would have nothing to lose by going to the police. No blackmailer wants the person blackmailed going to the police.
Finally, the internet is fast but it is not instant. Sending photos takes time, even more so over wireless. Each photo would take at least 5 second to be transmitted. Therefore, grabbing and closing the laptop would terminate the transmission of the emails. Therefore, being alone with and setting next to the person being blackmailed is a risk he would not take.
Since the story is not plausible and because it is contridictory, I cannot justify giving it a higher rating.
I confess I was nearly overcome with happiness when she first walked - but unsure for the first few paragraphs if it was real or she was just protecting him. But the exchange with the secretary and then the phone call and comment came back - too few stories in this section here celebrate simple life and love as this did - you seem to do that occasionally lol
A great read, great twist ending. You could've added yet another twist by having the husband and wife reveal that they had planned the whole thing to get the bonus, but an excellent story well told just as it is!
This has gotta be the dumbest story ever written...but...it is so sweet that it gets 5 stars from me and should be reasonably high on the all time list.
I Think He should have just asked the company to shove the offer where the sun does not shine after the indignation that his wife had to go through.
Good plot but should have ended with him telling the board where to shove it.That being said he now has the high ground on the so called moral majority.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
I enjoyed reading this... nice job.
Regards, Jack
This story rocks and for a good follow up read rpsuch follow-up he is faithful to the tale and adds a little more fun to the peice, together this is a wonderful story.
I really liked this story, with one caveat that I'll explain below. It's fun to have a tongue-in-cheek tale about married life, where the point is not the heartbreak of infidelity and deception, but rather the intrusion of men of ill-will into a loving relationship where everything comes out more-or-less OK.
The creation of any kind of "gimmick story" is difficult, since hiding the true nature of the gimmick while maintaining the readability of the story is a balancing act. HDK, my hat is off to you for the way you worked the gimmick in the early part of the story, making it clear that the wife would NOT want the pictures made public - but not why. Good job. The entire ramp-up to the confrontation was also handled well, with us wondering whether or not the Black Hats would be able to get what they wanted, and what the repercussions would be of his giving in and then having them send the pictures off anyway. I was left wondering how he would be able to manage the multiple disasters you'd set him up for - security breach, adulterous affair, and management which doesn't abide immoral or untrustworthy actions.
The denouement, where it becomes clear that he did have time to salvage the situation with respect to the corporate espionage - but the Big Bosses are ready to fire him over his indiscretions while on travel. Now, as he is refusing to divulge the truth, his wife walks in to reveal the whole story; she was the one in Vegas who was photographed with him, and so there's an embarrassment, but no immorality. And here's where I dispute the story. I'm willing to believe that the husband is trying to shield his wife from shame by refusing to talk about their encounter, and I'll certainly believe the wife willing to take matters into her own hands and coming to tell the bosses that there was no immorality. But I have a very hard time with the whole attitude of, "we just don't believe you" coming from the whole group, including the wife of the owner. This is a man who has been head of Security for years, has shown his implicit trustworthiness, and whose wife has come to support him in his story. The level of mistrust shown here is so high that if this happened for real, the hero would have to resign because they are showing clearly that they don't trust him. I know that you set up a confrontation of this scale so that we can have the final shocker - the wife proving her love for her husband by baring her body completely to the entire board. Except for this rather silly denouement, this is a fun gimmick story.
good story and what sounds like a very good looking wife, the epitome of LOVING WIFE.
keep up the great writting
Mike from Texas
Interesting, full of humor and just a tad sexy....A welcome read...thank you HDK.....
Does anyone but me wonder why TLEE has no stories of his own we can comment on?.I wanna see something that boy has written.....
This was better than When I Get Home. There were a couple of somewhat unbelievable parts but the fact that I felt I wanted more, (I would have liked to see the blackmailers caught), made this a good one.
I also have to agree with our friend from Norcal regarding the infamous General Lee. This mutant leaves a trail of moronic statements throughout this site. Quite the donkey, he is.
Standard bearer of truth and forthrightness. Master of any and all four letter epithets. How invigorating for you to crawl out from beneath your rock. I'm sure all here are that much better for you having shared your remarkable insight and wisdom.
If you get off on saying “Shit” in different ways ten times in a second, far be it from me to prevent you from having your little pleasures!.*** Regarding your brave exposure of hypocrisy (suspecting that somehow people around you are not telling the truth), it sure sounds like a paranoid rant to me…