All Comments on 'Andi'

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And it was a (thankfully) short version of The Wedding Planner.

I didn't like the characters. But more so, I missed any sort of plot. I suppose there was a 'Degredation of the Morals of Andi' which is good for the strokers.

Unfortunately, I like a story and there wasn't any here.

But as ususal, it had great technical merit.

You are right there are no redeeeming qualities in any of these people. Kind of sad actually.

anyone? Bueller? Bueller?

He told you not to read it! Not only do you not play well with others, but you don't follow instructions either!

Way to go JPB, a great stroker, even if it is fiction. Have known several Andi types in my time, and you did them all justice, Celia was a cool twist. Thank you.

hated it

Technically well written dreck. The best I can say for it is to call it a sad waste of talent.

This is the standard that extreme, depraved stories will be measured by. The coitus & banter flows non stop. Shame is a dim concept existing only in theory. Nitty gritty fantasy err is fantasy right ?

Regardless this accident by side of road reading - the prelude warnining is warrented in full. You gotta look then finish or wonder the rest of your life.

your stories have all been in the toilet for the last year or so.

What is the purpose of this story? Totally boring. Well written, with only a dozen or so errors an editor should have noticed. But why was it written. Certainly not entertaining. This author is capable of much better, actually some outstanding work, but not recently.

I missed the point, although in all fairness you did warn us

I haven't read this story yet. I will, but I just resist commenting on your before the story comments. LOVED THEM! The reaction to a couple of my stories make me wish I your words were mine.

I will read Andi soon.

It made me feel a bit gay just reading the crap ; )

Nothing good about the people. Just a big pile of people sucking and fucking their way through life. I guess Glen is supposed to be bad as well because he doesn't like how pregnant women look and fucked his secretary. JPB drags everyone into the mud. The problem is, once you take away the pretend tension about the marriage, none of them are very interesting either.

"Hi. I'm a slut. Let's fuck. OK!" Repeat.

I don't really have a problem with her being a slut. Why didn't she find a husband like Mark who doesn't care if his wife fucks around? Why pretend to have a normal marriage? Then Ms. Holland Tunnel gets annoyed because hubby is fucking his secretary? Really?? That was a real laugh.

stang star and bob on the same page have I died and gone to heaven

So, why get married in the first place? She could be enjoying all the fucking she wants as a single woman, without cheating on anyone. And how can she say she loves her husband when she's a super-whore behind his back? I just don't get it...and I *HATE* cheaters... mind you, the husband ain't much better....

Absolutely no redeeming value! And worse yet, the damn thing was 5 pages long!

The jelouse slut? Not an open marriage, because the wife mixed up her husband extramarital affair.......

Bob that intro just broke me up. Going to read the story now. Thanks for it. Jim

the absolute best cheating sucking slut whores on the net. love the intro bob.

sooner or later something is going to snap, crackle and pop. TK U MLJ LV NV

And you're right - there wasn't a likable character in the whole story. Just a big pack of cheaters, hoes and pimps. They seemed pretty clueless too. Nasty fun.

she was accurate in her self description. TK U MLJ LV NV

One of you worse stories Bob, come on get it together

stopped reading and just gave it 1*. Most of your stories are good but this one sucks.

Celia called the Cops! Got a rape kit done. Andi and the boys went to jail. After all, Celia had their sperm in her when she cried rape and Andi was the one that set it up. Between the "boys" and Andi trying to get a lighter jail sentence, they ratted each other out. Besides, even if she didn't get jail time, all their activities get exposed. Divorces happened, girlfriends dropped boyfriends. In other words - The Shit Hits The Fan! After all that, you're ending seemed tame and boring. And one question - Was Glen REALLY that stupid?

but no heat. another slut awakens.

I know this is fiction, just a fuck story. However their are people like this out there. Soon one will get an STD then things will go snap crackle & POP !! The husband is somewhat guilty as well here, but if this slut really loves him Why is she doing this ? It's WAY beyond a little cheating. Andi's lust takes precedent over her marriage vows ? How can she look the man in the face and then sit on his face after fucking half dozen men ? It's true what they say, when you have sex with a person--you're having sex with all their past pardners as well. This will not end well.........T

no one to like here

...just for being able to think up and write such a wild, perverted, creative fantasy. When i'm sitting around with nothing to do but think, nothing like this ever comes to mind. But I guess it does come to Bob's mind.

Plus the comments it engendered were a little humorous.

Paul in Oklahoma

if you are looking forward to your own divorce

Your stories or the comments. I don't always read all the comments since the first 5 or 10 always reflect the other 90 or so. But I do read every word of the stories. Enjoyed a lot and some not so much but if I liked them all I would be just as perverted as you and I'm not willing to admit that yet.

No plot. Just a lot of sex and cheating with no consequences.

One of JPB's stranger stories. Well written but without any direction. That is the weird part. This needs more.

Welcome to the 1970s! This is a period piece is there ever was one. Celia and Mark got it right. No need for so much false piety, eh? You write well, JPB, but I guess you know that. I enjoyed the style, as if it were a sexual biography. By the way, why did Glenn and Andi like each other? Their personalities in domains other than sex never appeared. There must have some major attraction, but I guess that's the unsolved mystery of your story. Five stars from me.

Pointless story

Awful. Such characters will burn.

Thanks for your writing.

What a loathsome slut she is, hated her and hated the story. 1* all the way.

While long winded this tale left me wanting the husband to find out about her infidelity. Instead he too becomes a cheater. Now it ends as a circle of infidelity and free for all sexual escapades.

Very good story. I do not understand the outrage in the comments over a fictional nymphomaniac (sexual addict).

I hope you think it’s funny but I don’t. You’re right, there is absolutely no redeeming value to this shit. The MC doesn’t have a clue after many year, the bitch just keeps on rolling. Too bad I’m an editor instead of an author because this story needs a total rework including attorneys, lawsuits and richly deserved paybacks. I hope you don’t do this for a living as I’d never pay to read it. I only finished to see if you woke up and gave the poor guy a lot of pay back. MtM

Your intro to this story was spot on, I wish that Literotica would introduce a minus score for crap like this.

Way too long, repetitive, and boring. I’m a big JPB fan but this was just awful