by Baxter72
Andie in Wonderland is a main character one would really enjoy meeting and getting to know in real life. Sexy, witty and a little risque ~ it's no wonder the Uncle finds her attractive.
Beautifully well written. Delightful Read!
That’s how erotic stories should be. Unfortunately, many readers are desensitized by tired repeated lists of body parts combined with sex related verbs - all mistakenly confused with erotic writing.
I love your literary references. I love the humor. But mostly, I like the irreverence and the casual fun approach to sex; no heavy duty machismo; no hypocritical abiding to self censoring (see the story about four sisters...);How refreshing.
I would say though that it seems that this writing comes fairly easy to you (I may be wrong on this one). Some of the erotic encounters; dialogues could benefit from more details, slower pace. How about it for your next submission?