All Comments on 'Angel Breaks Her Vows'

About time she was pregnant with a half caste bastard for her husband to support

from Africa is a bloody fucking fool. AIDS is running wild there and even the tree climbing monkeies have it. But than a white woman who fucks a nigger deserves what she gets. And the writer, well pigs are cleaner.

WOW! you gave this str8 white female one FABULOSULY incredible big O!!! ty ty ty. Looking forward to more. ps: those not interested in this type of story,,, why read it?

Love this theme. You are the best.

Generally good story, but she seems a little too willing.ˇ

People like you deserve to die alone, destitute, disease ridden, and tortured. It is so sad to see these stories. Why is it that all white women have to be enamored with black dick, all the white husbands are wimps, and the black lovers have enormous dicks. It's just sad.

as I walk around my rather impoverished neighborhood, I see not quite a few young and old white women, carrying, pulling, and pushing carts, sometimes with two or three babies --- half black, half white --- and sometimes you can even tell, visually, they likely belong to different biological sperm donors, too

once, when younger, many of these white women must have looked "hot," too, I guess,,, but now they look any but! they look exhausted, wrinkled, blemished, nasty, even from afar, again, some with multiple young babies (this is real life from my poorer neighborhood, now, not Literatica fiction),,,

these white women are obviously still "attracting" many big brothas with the extra sized equipments, brothas who don't seem to do naught but fuck these "golden thighed" beautiful blue-eyed blonde wifes and mother,,, brothas for whom these women here in Literature (and probably in real life here in the 'hood, too) would go extra miles to fool their husbands, kids, parents, et al. to fuck with,,,

again, it's "hot", when I "see" blue-eyed blonde women/wives, being fucked hard and crudely,,, being made (actually, they're never that reluctant to start with, it seems) to swallow SPIT, semen, and urin from the brothas as well as shit from the women's own butt, etc.,,,,

reversal of fortunes is always great, if I may say so,,, after centuries of being treated badly by the dominated and treated badly,,, some even went hung from being accused of just looking at white women the wrong way! lol

I am so surprised by the opinionated, ignorant, self-serving comments that some people have made regarding this and other stories along the same theme.

People, this is just a piece of fiction, no more.... no less. Not a comment on morality, social concience or a recommendation to participate in sexual activity in an AIDS ridden nation.

To those of you who have posted caustic comments about the fictional sexual relationship between these fictional characters, grow up!! Or maybe, confine your reading to tamer subjects. "Better Homes and Gardens" might be more to your liking??

Leave this story to those of us who can appreciate a well written piece of fiction and not confuse it with reality.

man and then her husband leaves her there in Africa to be used by the entire tribe. You see I beleive 99.9% of black men use white women as cum holders. And these whites are so fucking dumb they fall in love with our big cocks. To bad, the more whites we fuck the better. Pass the word ladies we fuck like aniomals like fuckingh should be. We don't l;ve we fuck. I just hope the white husbands in Amreica never wake up. I love to fuck a white marrried woman and get her belly full of my seed. Come on ladies join the party, all of you white bitchs come and see a black man let him fuck you and help to destroyt your race for you. White men folk are so dumb but their women are tight and great fucks!

Excellent story.Very well written. Shows a lot of talent.

Unfortuntely, it IS fiction. Africa. Cradle of humanity. Unfortunately it is also the last bastion of rampant disease, brutality, rape, cannibalism, barbarianism, and lawlessness. Witness Somalia, Nigeria, Rawanda, Zimbabwe, Angola, Congo, Ivory Coast to name a few.

Yep, I been there and seen all that. In real life, Angel would do well to cut her own fucking throat after she broke her vows because if the rival warlords, pirates, disentary (sic), animals, or various other diseases don't kill her, the AIDS certainly will.

Are these true stories of your time there writer? You have a predilection for white wives, gigundus black cocks and the associated helplessness she then hubbie feels.

This demeaning at length excites you or you wouldn't write the cuckolded braindead hubbie as much as you do.

A shame as well written, but as so often as of late the island fever strikes again.

...all white husbands should be lucky enough to have their wives taken by a black lover like this!

Excellent work!!!

I was quite surprised that at least six comments were added before the story was even published...makes you wonder.

Africa is indeed a place of destitution, disease, and poverty.

It is also a continent of extreme luxury, and even more extreme wealth...were the rich can but just about anything they want and own villas/lodges that cannot even be approached by road...

and like all places where men live lust and desire follow, wealth corrupts, particularly the women who want some of that wealth...

I truly enjoyed this work. I find it interesting how controversial a piece of fiction on an erotic site is. "Angel Breaks Her Vows" is incredibly well written, but I wonder how much of it is social commentary and how much is frivilous fiction, no judgment one way or the other, just curiosity. Your description and imagery are flawless. I'm intrigued to see what happens with his other philosophy students and with Angel's studies. I rarely leave comments, but I felt there needed to be more balance for all the ignorant "feedback" you've received. I look forward to your next submission and entreat you to keep writing regardless of adversity.

Thanks for a very well written story (however, we've come to expect no less from this excellent writer). A super great turn-on. Hope the stories continue for a very long time.

Thanks for a very well written story (however, we've come to expect no less from this excellent writer). A super great turn-on. Hope the stories continue for a very long time.

Thanks for a very well written story (however, we've come to expect no less from this excellent writer). A super great turn-on. Hope the stories continue for a very long time.

Interesting comment by 'Chagrined' for a moment I thought he was talking about LA!

Your writing keeps me wanting more, more chapters on the white wives and daugthers in Africa. Your stories have woven a web that leaves you wondering which woman Igwe will have his way with next and how. With you comments on these women having black babies, I wonder if and how Igwe will get Angel off her birth control pills. I am anxiously awaiting your next submission. Thanks for the stories.

Time to hear about Angel's daughters taking a big black cock

Angel NEEDS to be impregnated by submission to complete her subdugation by mr I. Please keep the story true to form by impregnating wives and daughters of white men. It is the ultimate infidellity for a white whife to bear a black child or a daughter to do the same.You are one of the best erotica writters on the net. PLEASE KEEP THE STORIES CUMMING.

Your stories are excellent, and your work is much missed by Lit readers. Hope to see some new stories in the new year.

I’m hoping to read the next chapter in the near feature, because I like this well written story. I hope in the feature parts Angel and her daughters will get pregnant by Igwe.

Fantastic writing style, made me feel every thing as it played out in words! Very nice indeed.

BBC rules

LOVE THIS SORY AND I HOPE SOMETHING SIMILAR HAPPENS TO ME mARY

One of the best authors of Interracial stories on this site. They all ring true, and are highly erotic. He understands the pure sexual gratification obtained by a white wife fucking a hugely hung black man.

Yep

I just love this series! In this last story, it would have been hotter if Angel hadn't disrobed so quickly; the struggle inside her mind is the sweetest part. But that's not so bad.. the one part of the story I didn't like was "Thank God she was on the pill!" . It would be SO much hotter to think of him seeding her fertile womb. I know it's been several years, but I hope you write more.

This shit is sick. Get help.

love to be black bred like this

This story is fantastic!! I could read a dozen of these as he turns her into a married black cock slut.

I really like this series as far as its gone and it looks like this is going to be left unfinished. I was hoping/expecting a confession to Mark, who has already let us know he likes the fantasy of his wife having sex with a black African man. With Mark's approval and encouragement I anticipated Angel being shared with friends and perhaps involved in a trading arrangement with Igwe's African business associates.

This is an amazing story. I hope it continues. It's is similar to my life. I brought my Filipina wife here to Florida in 1990. I convinced her to have sex with a black air force man and 31 years later at 61 years old she is still having and loving black sex. We have 4 black grown children that we are very proud of.

It was the most sexual story I have ever read . tell me when it continues

Tremendous details. I have to say Inwas completely excited reading your story.