All Comments on 'Angels Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good Work

Can't wait for them to all kiss and make up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Worth the wait

Pretty good installment. The sex & the emotion between the girls was credible, especially the scenes of anger & betrayal. I hope we see the girls reconcile. Kat has some huge work ahead of her. I also hope it doesn`t turn into a cliche 3-way orgy. Maybe the dad can surpress his urges for the sake of his girls` happiness, cause that would be unusual to see in a story.

But mainly I hope we don`t have to wait so long for the next part!

Many thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
WOW!!!

All I can say is more please! oh and soon!! It has the makings of a great story. Thanks!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
WOW

This story is incredible. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Very good. There must be more. Soon.

kuro1990kuro1990about 12 years ago
Great...

Story hope you finish it unlike half the other stories on this site!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Better Have A Happy Ending!

I love this story and really want it to end happily. So please make it so.

Major_PlotholeMajor_Plotholealmost 10 years ago
Good work.

Really interesting story, quite riveting. Very sexy love scenes, but actually believable plot - and actually quite interesting. A few grammar errors here and there, but nothing major. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter. (Please lord, let there be a next chapter.)

Ib_SaysIb_Saysabout 8 years ago

Liked the first chapter a lot more, there was just too much angst and melodrama in this one.

Hate seeing this end here, incomplete.

C_frommnC_frommnover 7 years ago
Chapter #3

Anybody besides me wanting to see the Story finished.

SithLord6969SithLord6969over 5 years ago
great story

Such a great twist, a shame we never got part 3. Did Jess forgive Kat? Did Kat get pregnant? Did all 3 have sex together?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
4r realt

His is how u end it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hell of a story going here and the it's abandoned.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

story good but spelling and use are BAD

ToughSailorToughSailor5 months ago

WOW. What a story so far. It takes prescience over all the naysayers . . . .

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