All Comments on 'Ann Goes to the Chatroom'

that's what you're on lil guy--the right track. especially for dominant males, there's nothing like a combination of mature woman and her domination for an erection-rousing change of pace....very sexy stuff. I apologize for leaving no name, but it can't be helped.

the basic story is well thought out, but the use of English and grammar is awful. not to be insulting, but you might think of taking an English refresher course. It would make it easier to under the plot and pattern of the story. Good effort though, keep it up.

The English grammar in this story is horrible