All Comments on 'Another Chance'

Unhurried and nicely written. Perhaps Im a little biased - having being on my own for many years, and of the age (of the participants) in which the story is set. I would like to think similar adentures might come my way! Thank you for this, its a gentle story, and well told.

The only adverse criticism I have is that it could have been put into several chapters, prolonging the wonderful development. Overall VERY GOOD. I hope you keep writing.

Thought it was good enough for a "5" and a 100% rate for the content of the story and how it went with the age of the participants.! I to wish along this line but without much hope of getting this lucky. Very good story, thanks.

Hmmm been there, done it, such a pleasure. You covered so well~~ Thank you.

David

Very good well written story. 5/5

Great erotica! 5 stars.