All Comments on 'Another Sexy Father In Law'

This story for some reason seems a bit sanitized as if a computer program wrote it. It has no feelings behind it. Keep writing though, I like most of your stories, and your style

... that you didn't bother to proof-read and remove the many errors, such as the multiple use of "and" instead of "an"!!

Or "ywist" instead of "twist"!!

Or "there" instead of "their"!!

Very hot and erotic, especially since he knocked his daughter in law up and perhaps her mom too.

Thanks for the read.

What a fantastic story this is, I loved every moment. I particularly liked the sequence where Robert took Lucy's anal virginity, really excellent, well written passage! The icing on the cake was knowing that Robert impregnated his daughter in law, but only after turning her into his slut! The guy's an absolute stud, he then fucks her mother! I think a post birth reunion with lucy is called for, how about it?

I love your FIL & DIL stories .... Do you have anymore of this genre in store for us?

was so bad I couldn't read the first half of page one.

I liked your story, what I hate are these wankers whom criticise writers for the odd spelling error! Unless you are a writer writer yourself fuck off with your criticism, particularly if you don’t have the balls to identify your self. These stories are FREE ffs just read and enjoy them for what they are. Piss off with your inane comments regarding there and their being use incorrectly! It’s just god damn petty! And as for the twat that stated he hated the writing fuck off you turd! The only reason I have posted this comment as anonymous is I can’t be arsed to enter a ‘war’ of words with a twat! And if I had a criticism of a story I would identify myself to allow the author the right to reply/respond to negative comments. Thank you