by astuffedshirt_perv
Overally I really really liked it. I did think it was a little odd he fucked her ass and didn't fuck her pussy. But the story was strong and believable.
Great story, well written. really really hope its based on actual events. Keep up the good work
That was one of the sexiest stories I have read...just wish I knew a couple of girls like that.
Hope you write more
Short, but with a plausible introduction. The perspective was clear and felt right. Even if the style was a little unusual.
I really liked the second part. That was intense for me as a reader, too. ;-)
It was really well written. I loved how Jack and Lisa manipulated her and did whatever they wanted with her.