by JANAMARIE
Please don't make us wait another year for the next chapter. Very nicely done.
You truly put most of the other writers on these pages to shame. You develop: characters, scenes, and plots while they really have no idea how to write like this.
Please, Please give us more. I have read every one of your 32 stories and this is one of the best.
why did you use such strange names it made it so hard to read i stopped after a couple of paragraphs please use english names as it seems you are not from a forien country
apart from the weird names which were hard to understand but after a while you just shorten them to something easy.
Really enjoy your stories! The plots and telling are great. It is a bonus that you know grammer and vocabulary and thus avoid the jarring errors present in so many presentations.
Thanks.
I really enjoyed your storie. I felt it was a well told tale and felt the emotional connection you spoke of between you and the sisters.
if this is true ,my hat is off to you #1 having 2 sisters that love you like there's no tomorrow is like winning the lottery . #2 when they are both ok in sharing you with the other , you got made. don't fuck this you never find another one in your time.
Just one fuck after another, no real story, just a few random conversations and descriptive passages to string the endless sex-scenes together; over 106,000 people read this, only 8 saw fit to favorite it; I wonder why...
Very boring, no stars, sorry
Like I said in a previous story, there's not enough FFM b/s stories. Keep up the god's work!