All Comments on 'Antonio the Serial Rapist'

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Kinda rushed and random. Needs a few more intimate details to give it more of an edge. I did like how it switched and he got his payback in the end though.

The Punishment fits the Crime in this case. That's as it SHOULD be. Especially as the little shit would likely get a thorough ass-bollocking on a regular basis from his fellow prison inmates too. Great. THAT's as it should be in this case TOO. Oh, And throw away the key.

Your story is kind of different, isn't it? Almost reminds me of a documentary.

He doesn't rape with immunity, he rapes with impunity.

Your politics are even more trite than your prose.

Obvious and petty feminist caricature. It's basically a New York Times article written more or less from the perspective of the rapist. Keep your politics away from the realm of sexual fantasy.

At least they know how to write good copy

Firstly- The writing style doesn't include a lot of detail, which is a shame

Secondly- I was hoping he'd get away with it. That's what the story was suggesting, massively disappointing.

Sycophantic liberal drivel. I'm going to print a copy of this excrement and burn it...your story will contribute to global warming. This is the opposite of erotica, and does not have the intelligent structure to even be considered as an essay.

Really? That was the best you could do? Shows you why Feminists are lesbians. They have no imagination.