All Comments on 'Anything You Ask'

Most relationships can grow stale if you're not constantly working at it. This story was actually written for a specific friend who enjoys being submissive. In its writing, I found out how much I truly enjoyed taking a power role. But maybe more so because it was a new experience. I had just been to Key West and was still sporting the henna tattoo that I'd received while on the island. It was a heady experience and it felt right to include part of it in this story.

It's all about exploring the possibilities.

This was a really nicely written work on this area of the sex genre. Not sadistic at all but totally dominant in a very playful and enjoyable manner. The only change or addition I might suggest making is adding some scenes of Steven while he is in Texas, showing his personal anxieties while, say, searching the world over for a string and unable to find it, while fretting over what his Mistress will do to him when he tells her of his failure to heed her commands and then his ingenuity at thinking up the idea of using the tie. Or of Steven when he enters the Sex Shop and his confrontation with the saleslady - perhaps a Domme herself, and the games she perhaps might have gotten to play with our hapless boy before he had a chance to escape. Just some thoughts. Otherwise, as I said, a very nice story. Well done.

This was a really nicely written work on this area of the sex genre. Not sadistic at all but totally dominant in a very playful and enjoyable manner. The only change or addition I might suggest making is adding some scenes of Steven while he is in Texas, showing his personal anxieties while, say, searching the world over for a string and unable to find it, while fretting over what his Mistress will do to him when he tells her of his failure to heed her commands and then his ingenuity at thinking up the idea of using the tie. Or of Steven when he enters the Sex Shop and his confrontation with the saleslady - perhaps a Domme herself, and the games she perhaps might have gotten to play with our hapless boy before he had a chance to escape. Just some thoughts. Otherwise, as I said, a very nice story. Well done.

one thing though; google "candles, deaths"

Leaving your loved one helpless in a room lit by candles could lead to a lifetime of regret for you.

your stories are the ones that keep me coming back to this site that has so much that belongs in the Non-erotic section rather than loving wives.