All Comments on 'Apache Woman'

What???????????????

I really wanted to like this story. But it's so poorly written I cannot.

You need an editor, or proof reader, bad. Barely 3 stars.

Cute. I generally like longer storyline, this is well done and a very pleasant quickie.

Good to see you putting pen to paper. Yatahey.

So glad to see you putting pen to paper. Yatahey.

The mind is amazing, both that of the author and that of the lead characters. 5

Good to see you back, but, maybe I didn't get the memo?

What a stupid end, just waking up and declaring his love!!