All Comments on 'Apologies to the Sitter'

I like the setup and the plot. Keep writing.

Thanks

Great job. I can't wait to read more of your writing. You have a gift for setting up arousing situations and milking them for all they're worth.

This had lovely, very real touches to it that made the fantasy so much more fun to invest in ... i can't wait to read more : ) Thank you!

That was great is there going to be a part 2.

Very very well done, keep writing.

Beautifully written. There are far too few cuckquean stories here. I hope you continue exploring this theme. Until next time, xxx

Looking forward to part two, would like to see Maggie turned into a submissive and bring in her Mom and friends.

I am looking forward to more. I would suggest an editor to proof read for word usage and such.

But for what are you apologizing? Seems she made out pretty well herself - the sitter that is. I would suggest setting up a hierarchy with hubby then sitter then wife - and having the wife train orally on them after they fuck, i.e. cleaning them up. But a very yum story!

p.s. read this after we met in chat - hope to see you there again!

What a delightful way to begin exploring a new author to me. This is an exquisite study in domination. I look forward to finding what other jewels you've laid out for us.

Thank you!

-alextasy

Great balance in the rising tension within all players in this scenario. Well written!

Very good erotic story well told. Right amount of character development. The feeling of sexual arosal is very strong. Well done.

I love this kink and this story told it well. One thing this author does well is dialogue. Many writers forget this aspect and talk about 'this and that' happening. They lose the one place where they can make an impact - the dialogue. The dialogue in this story made it especially hot. Thank you, PhilosopherX! Please write more cuckquean tales!

I like the story, the exquisite exposition, and, of course, the sex. I write this kind of story, but I tend to go too quickly to the hard core stuff. I need to emulate your style of slow build-up. Love it! Five stars!

Need a follow up. Loved it but would like more of Maggie controlling cynthia

Amazing! I really love your work.

I loved this story! So erotic! I love how Cynthia first kissed Maggie's legs instead of diving right in... very sexy. I also loved how Cynthia was made to give Maggie a sensuous kiss. I like your writing stye!

Very well done. Very erotic. The story left me wanting more... I hope there is more.

Omg… wow!! Loving it💦

5 stars. This story could use a sequel. I've just found your writing and am now a fan. Very well crafted and very hot.

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I love how humane and loving this is. excellent.

Loved this story. Fairly well written & enjoyed the thought of my own sitter becoming confident enough to dominate my wife into submission

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