All Comments on 'Apology Accepted'

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don87654don87654over 18 years ago
A good start

Can we have more of this one?

saw_man1saw_man1over 18 years ago
Abstruse

I enjoy a story that leaves a little to the imagination but here there is too much unsaid. Since they were obviously still living together, why was the home void of any memories of their relationship? If it was her lie that separated them why did he need to apologize? If they were separated why was he still living there? It is not necessary to know what the lie was but some allusion to it would have been helpful in understanding what happened to these two. Of course I might just be too dense to get it. If that’s the case, I apologize.

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