All Comments on 'Apple'

What a wonderful story! Beautifully written, sexy, believable characters. A+++

What a truly beautiful and moving story. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Keep writing, you do it so well.

but I just had to say how much I love this story - keep writing!

I agree with the other favorable comments. However, it wouldn't have bothered me if Kaylee had fallen on bad times.

This story was really impressive! Truly believable, very erotic, and well done all around!

very good I felt it has if I was there. made me very wet

You have a gift! Your characters spring to life. You captured innocence and growth. The story rings true and the beauty of blooming sexuality radiates the JOY of life. Thanks

Simple, warm, and sensual! One of the best I have read in a very long time.

Breathtaking. The only suggestions would be that 1) he should've been more sensetive to her wounds (or you could have made them less severe-sounding) 2) he could've been 23 instead of 29; and 3) ideally, they would've reconnected.

I agree with the others. You are an incredible writer and what a wonderful story! I think I need to go and read some of your other work, Wow, this and you are simply amazing...

This was an amazing story! Very nicely done!

Terrific, sensual story. Turned this gay man on with the delicate details of their lovemaking.

that was so amazing. winter sounded so beautiful, and i felt a lump in my.. throat when i read that she just left.

One of the best stories I've ever read on here! Keep up the great work!

...I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, and it truely is one of the better stories I have read here. Well done and thank you for posting it.x

I very much enjoyed it. There was a connection, it was sweet and sensitive (not terribly popular adjectives, from what I've read on literotica). I will have to check out your other submissions.

Beautiful story.! Wish there could of been a '10' instead of a '5' and a 105 rate instead of a 100 on here.!! Since my Author no longer writes - this is number one on this site.~ Keep it up and I will go back and see what else you have written.!!!! JAG/TSO

You deserve all the praise you've gotten! This is an excellent story. Thanks for sharing it with us!

You're writing is amazing. You've left me speechless. It makes me wish my first time had been exactly like that.

You are my new favorite author. What an incredible story...so sensual and sweet, yet hot and steamy at the same time. The words flowed like honey. Just an amazing read. I can not wait to read more of your submissions.

That was a nice story you wrote About Winter and her teacher. It was nice how you described the taking of her virginity in that sequence and erotic and sensual you made it sound. I like how he ended the story with her getting married and having a good life. Keep writing

Thank you for writing a sensual, meaningful story.

Very well written piece. Great emotion and flow. Personally, I would've like a bit more description of her body, but the lack of that did not detract much at all from the story.

This was... wow. This was a story about making love. Thank you.

LittleAngelle,

One of the top two stories I have had the pleasure to enjoy. I have never been a high school teacher but tonight I was, I felt every emotion with him. Thank you.

Ken

That has to be the most beautiful thing I've read in a long time. The only problem was I dislike the emo culture :3

Oh, this is a splendidly sexy story of first love. The girl is wonderful, an eager virgin who really loves her teacher for saving her from a vicious attack and gently ministering to her wounds. Then she wants him to be her first (one-time) lover. The plot is well-designed and beautifully written. We know the pair has no future, and yet the tone is entirely upbeat: rain will always bring back smiles to both lovers.

Very nice.

sounds like another day @ my high school popular airhead tramps picking on cute emo girls other than that loved it

Amazing story. Love to say I'd like a sequel wih these two, but that's not what their lives are about, is it?

Don't ever stop writing, angel.. you have a gift.

Sem Cera,

Sidon

Absolutely amazing. Thank you so much for writing this.

That was very nice. Thank you.

and beautifully written. Thank you.

... Wonderful! About as good as it gets, I was left with a lump in my throat (and a bulge in my jeans too) nicely written, thought out and felt! Keep up the good work!

Without a doubt, the best story I have ever read in quite a while. Absolutely beautiful. I'm hoping to see more of your stories in the future. Thank you for your time & effort in the making of this story.

- Garry. G

Absolutely outstanding!

I salute you!

I rarely leave comments on websites. This is beautiful, I have yet to read such short, sweet and flowing story that left me a bit breathless.

I think I'll keep this book marked...

Because it is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. It had a simple beauty to it, a reverence to it. I cant' quite explain it, but I think its really beautifully written.

Thank you for posting it for others to read.

Yours

Burningplain

Very beautiful and moving story. Thank you.

A caring and loving teacher gave her the love she so needed even if it was for one night, but she carried it with her

so beautiful and emotional !

Nicely done.....

The story, short as it was, was well thought out, beautiful and moving. I've come across some of those kids like Winter and in every case, I've found something special -- a talented singer or musician, an artist, a kid who could make a computer sit up and do tricks that seem impossible, a skateborder who ought to go pro or sometimes just a kid with a heart as big as all outdoors. I think that's what made the story special; even if you weren't like Winter or her teacher, you probably knew someone like them. On top of that, your ability to paint vivid word pictures adds immeasurably to this work. I truly wish I could give it a 10 instead of just a five. Thank you for sharing it with us. You've made my day just a little brighter.

This was another Beautifully written story by you and I wish you would write more. You play of words paints a passionate picture that very few authors or writers can do. I hope to see your writing again soon.

You should have ended her letter to him with her translating what he said to her.

Brace yourselves, Winter is cumming :-)

Beautiful, beautiful story. I nearly cried at the end, you're such a good author.

Breathing

asianToy

Loved it!

Very well written, and a very enjoyable story.

5 Stars, an Instant Favorite, and my gratitude.

Great attention to detail, lovely nuance and a sense of the passage of time, at the end. I like the characters you created here, especially Winter. That's unusual because I normally pay more attention to the male lead. This was wonderful escapism. I'm going through your stories. Impressive stuff, at least the ones in my favored genres. I wish I knew what he said to her on Portuguese. I suppose she now knows, because of her married name.

Very well written. The tension and confrontations are crisply detailed. Very relatable characters. A teacher can definitely have a last impact even in unexpected ways!