All Comments on 'Apple Pie'

I need a neighbor like this

My pussy is gushing over this one...

Love the story and how slowly the reveal of her clothes were built UP. And the rest of the day before the game is on!!!

A stupid story with incredibly stupid characters. It was also very poor wank material

she gave him a tasty slice of hair pie, part of her inhairitance, i'm sure. may she'll return for him to core her after he skins her.

Again an unfinished story. Waiting for chapter 2 .

Well written, and engaging. We love the interplay, and thank you.

haha. I loved the interplay between the man and woman. I loved how concise and thought out the story was, many authors don't do so.

On the other hand Im inclined to agree with the other Anon, Cosmo sounds like an idiot, don't let his accolades go to your head Ashson, even if you may deserve them.

You are a master at this I truly love your stories. Please keep them coming.