All Comments on 'Apples and Oranges'

I like the way this is headed - can't wait to read more!

Very nice pacing, very seductive, excellent attention to details which really draw the characters out. You've done a nice job of making Miara and Alan human beings who elicit sympathy and interest before turning them into Dom and sub, which makes all the difference. Bravo!

wow...it was as if you took my own fantasy and put it to words. it was beautiful and i cannot wait to read more. i beg of you to please hurry with the next segment.

Very nice tale. I liked the way you switched bewtween the two every chapter. Keep writing. We need a sequel.

Just finished the ebook - Exceptionally written. Especially the last two exchanges.

The rest of the story?