All Comments on 'Appreciating a Woman Ch. 03'

by bigpapabare

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
SOME?

Some teacher,some pupil,some lesson,some story;how about some more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
good but

Story might be decently done. But seriously some edit work could greatly improve how easily it is read. There is extrememly too much use of ... for which 99.999% can be removed, and things like nnnnnnnoooooooooooowwwwwwww for emotions when a better option is NOW, does the same.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Absolutly Wonderful

I have just finished all three parts and it was very well done. Thank you so much for writing it. It does give me ideas.

Altara1aAltara1aover 16 years ago
Well Done

Very nicely put together bigpapabare. I loved the oral training sessions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
A lot can happen.

A lot can happen in 26HRS,perhaps enough for you to add a chapter or two in this excellent series.You can also get extended warranties you know?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
First Class

A first class story,very erotic,the commentator who mentioned the various .... etc. in the text,try reading this as if it was a script for a play,then you will see the significance of these pauses and sexual vocal points.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
YOU CAN'T

YOU CANT STOP HERE...........KEEP IT GOING....KEEP WRITING.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Sadist

What a sadistic thing to do,what about at least a detailed account of the warranty time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
This series

Is real erotic dynamite,a shame you stopped

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Personally I think it is pretty chickenshit...

To give him a taste for a day or two and then cut him off. This game could be played for a long time without any harm. Yes, I realize that it is just a story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
What a tease.

I don't like to be teased if it does not eventually result in a good payoff.

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