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"What? What is it?" Adam pulls back, and scoots away, seeing Merrick shuffle around onto his backside. Adam looked, and realized that the shell slice on Merrick's necklace is glowing and vibrating!
Merrick bolts right up, and gets off the bed, before striding to the window, and looking outside at the cloudy night sky.
"Merrick? What's wrong, babe?" Adam asked as he too gets up out of bed rose up. Merrick then turns to face Adam.
"Tonight is a full moon...!" He said, as the clouds apart from a large, white shining lantern in the sky.
- COMMENTS
Feare909over 7 years agoAuthorYeah, I still don't know why I thought it was a good idea to have Merrick suck Jamal's dick that resulted in a 3-way. That sex scene was like 6 pages long! Eventually, I want to lengthen it to more, but for now, it's a short chapter to make the story more tangible.
Anonymousover 7 years agoI started rereading cuz I couldn't remember a few things and I could have sworn there was more then 1 page in this chapter. The comments below cleared that up for me. I remember liking this chapter it wasn't great but I found it amusing.
o2byoungover 7 years agoIn response to Urgh - I have followed this story from Chapter 1 through 80, and have been fascinated. Yeah, maybe a couple of them weren't so hot, but keep reading! It gets better, I promise.
Whether you believe in mermaids or not, this series is very educational, and I patiently wait for Chapter 81. Feare909 is an excellent writer, and his writing has been an influence to me to also start writing.
Feare909over 7 years agoAuthorThis is normally the part where I get personally offended, buuuut... Fuck it all, I can't help but agree...
Please don't ask me what the hell I was thinking when I wrote this chapter, maybe I was in the mood for black guys at the time -_-
On that note, I'm just going to change this chapter to a very shortened version of itself until I can rewrite a better sequence - WITHOUT the bogus roommate/slash stuff.
I think the reason why I did this is because I used to be a Furry, and that crowd is Wild Sex personified.
I really wish you wouldn't give up on my story based on just one bad chapter though... For what it's worth, I'm sorry...
Anonymousover 7 years agoWhy on earth was the 3some needed? And what a bizarre thing to do to a guy who has been with this guy for FOUR years and you let him give you a blow job?
Urgh. Why do decent storie always turn into bizarre cheating & threesomes were the person who was cheated on has to forgive and act like a f*cking pussy? Sigh. was enjoying this but I'm gonna quit while I'm ahead. I have no respect for the leads.
Pity, you're a good writer. It is possible to have a lot of sex, dirty sex and not mess around with the storyline or characters in a really bizarre manner. Oh well.
