All Comments on 'Are You a Virgin?'

by Ashson

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WisconsiniteWisconsiniteabout 11 years ago
Well done, maybe misplaced

While well written and definitely erotic, this story might be better received in the nonconsent/reluctance section.

RavedThradRavedThradabout 11 years ago
Not the usual first time story...

...but entertaining, fun to read, and erotic just the same. So far, with this and "Moving House," I find myself enjoying the banter between the characters just as much as, or maybe even more, than the sex itself. Excellent work, a solid 5 for me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
She got what she wanted...

When Helen came over to her neighbour's place, she knew exactly what to expect. She might hide her desires with a facade of reluctance, but she'd clearly decided to take a break from horny teens and give it up to an experienced older guy. Any chance we'll see more of her (maybe she could bring along a friend for tuition next time)?

ErotonautErotonautabout 11 years ago
She got what she wanted...

Er, that should have been under my byline.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
oh so hot

I loved this story makes me hot and horny

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hi

No

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Yes!

Good one

OleguyOleguyalmost 11 years ago
Reluctant virgin?

I got the feeling she was ready (pill) but didn't know how to admit it.

Nice job!

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10almost 11 years ago
Okay!

I like the way you write, but this story was not your best attempt by far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Very Sexy

I love the older man giving the virgin her first taste of a real man. So hot and steamy. Its a turn on. Wanting to read more of this little story. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Pervert

That's my kind of pervert! Would have liked him as my neighbor at 18!

redheadedangel6769redheadedangel6769almost 9 years ago
perv

I love a great perv, would love to hear more on this story!!

christmas_apechristmas_apeover 8 years ago
sexcellent

very hot. thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

- - - you wrote - - - I suggested that it would be wise for her to put some antiseptic on it, and she pointed out that her parents were out for the afternoon and she couldn't reach it. Would I be so kind as to oblige.

Would I rub my lecherous hands over a nubile young body? I believe I would.

We went into her kitchen and she grabbed the antiseptic and I smoothed it over the scratch. Not deep enough for a bandaid I told her. - - -

the problem, you said she couldn't reach the antiseptic and yet she did...come on, this caused me to give you a lower score on what was an interesting story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More

This story needs more chapters. Well written.

Sman4444Sman4444almost 3 years ago

Loved all the fun teasing! Glad her 1st time was enjoyable.

WittonWitton4 months ago

Loved it! Five stars

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